Well, so far, the only Pony interested, needed to bow out, due to other commitments. So I've decided to post a sample of my writing, just to give everyone an idea of just how good, my story will be. The following is an early draft of a scene towards the middle of my story. See my previous post for full details.
To Twilight’s surprise, the normally bouncy Pinkie Pie actually had all four hooves on the ground, and actually seemed a little subdued. “Pinkie Pie, are you okay?” Twilight exclaimed. “Are you sick, I can have Spike make you some soup?” “No, no; I’m alright.” the party-loving pony laughed, soundi…
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I was browsing one of my favorite websites tonight, when I ran across a photo of a My Little Pony toy, labeled "G4 Mimic". Figuring it was just a commission of someone's original character, I clicked on it, just for giggles and grins. Ten seconds later, I was scrambling for Goggle. Low and behold, there actually was an offical Unicorn Pony, named Mimic, with a parrot cutie-mark, that came out in 1986, and she actually had an episode of the cartoon show about her. Now seriously interested, I went looking for a list of characters from the entire franchise. Not only was there a unicorn named Mimic, but there was also a Pegasus named Masquerade, who came out in the same year, noted as being quite the master of disguise. Right down to having a …Read more >
Okay Abcron was kind enough to let me know my original post created totally the wrong impression. For that, I do apologise. IRL, my life has been a train wreck, and it's made me even more of a Fluttershy than usual. The story I needed help on, is not in the begining stages, the narrative is actually about 3/4th's complete, needing only a couple of hours to polish my notes and scene sketches into a complete narrative.
Opperating under the working title, "Skin Deep" it's a pretty serious story, with some light-hearted moments, revolving around the idea that you have to be true to yourself. It starts Mirage, an OC of mine, along with the Cutie Mark Crusaders, with cameos by the mane six, Zecora, and Princess Celestia. About eight-…Read more >
I need a couple of ponies to act as a sounding board, and later, proofreaders for a fan-fiction I'm in the middle of writing. Right now, I'm not sure if a couple of my ideas make sense; sometimes, I can be a little too creative. *chuckles* As well, I need a little help refining my OC main character. I've got a good start, but RL stress is really preventing me from making her really unique.
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